hmph. That wimpy hikari of mine's gone. I like the poem though. Describes life in general quite well.

EEk. I like the imagery, but you can shut up about the first stanza cuz you know it's not true. ANYWAY I'm gonna go to school. ttyl angel :p Oh no I just ruined your iron mask reputation. Goshdarnit.

I'm still alive...haven't died yet. This was great! I love the way it was wrote. Very original. Keep up the great work.