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AntiPleasure 2004-02-22 ch 1,	Could invest more description and such in this but it's still good. Um, about your comment. Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate it very much. When you said "is it because of the way the moon reflects the suns light and so she is reflecting the moons light...?)" That's what I meant for venerating, not worshipping but how the moon relfects the sun, obviously I was trying to create a different kind of imagery where even the girl in the poem could light up the dark skies, if that makes sense. It shows that she gets her glow from the moon, and this overrides night and day. If that makes sense to you at all, maybe I'm confusing myself but that's what it is about. There, you said to explain to you, and there you have it. Hope that makes more sense to you. =) Jenna xx
Kim you know who I am.... 2004-01-04 ch 1,	hey! long time no review eh?! this tis still amazingly good... arg you put my work to shame... speaking of work i've managed to get up to 82 postings! yay! hopefully your new years eve was fun! and you had a good christmas! Hope that school is going well... Best Wishes for 2004! ~Kim
JazzeeT 2003-12-07 ch 1,	wow.. i like this.. i feel ur pain
Tanika 2003-12-06 ch 1,	hey, uh how you doin? from this poem i wouldnt think your doing to good. still not over this girl i see... she must have hurt you so bad. i bet ive said that before but its something that cros my mind when i read your poems like this. its a great poem, if it werent i wouldnt understand it. i cant wait till you get a new girl. one two times better then her. girls are sttracted to creative men. well alot of girls are. and those are the girls that will treasure your talent and treasure you. if our not looking for a girl get out there and start looking and if you are... kee looking and dont give up
Aimee Raven 2003-11-19 ch 1,	Aie...sobwail...did I tell you I was sensitive these days? you can be proud...sob..this is so sad, almost crying (most stuff makes me cry these days tho), oh yea, its Mia, lol. Wow...how coem i didnt read this b4? On my faves list...this is...probably the best I've yet read from you..awesomeness..short but so meaningful...I hate her...that is pathetic tho..but mayb i should b like wats her name..Kim and just not tell u anything cos i dont no u..but i cant.. this is fantastic.. Your motives are black as shadows, Yet my love for you grows. What do you have inside you, Where do I leave you the clue, To rip apart my closed citadel, And with a look place me in hell. my fave bit...tho i love the whole thing sigh..its sad cos such a beautiful poem comes from such a...unfortunate(not to say simply sad) thing... Well...aie..troubled now..love, Mia
k 2003-11-17 ch 1,	This is faboulous. Blood of a broken heart drips from every word, although i feel like some of the ryhming is forced. I'm sorry this girl has wronged you so. Any consolation i could give wounld't be very helpful, i fear, for i have no clue who you are. I just hope this woman hasn't completely shattered you. I hope the sun shines brighter for you! ~k
bag.end.hobbit 2003-11-11 ch 1,	uniform wise, marchingband we had the overall pant things, and jacket, shoes, gloves and beret for the hat. Spirit band i believe we get windbreakers that have our school name on them. Still love this one. Kim
Bleedingtree 2003-11-10 ch 1,	YAY! ANOTHER LONG AWAITED POSTING FROM MY FAVORITE KILT WEARING, RUGBY PLAYING SCOT! yay. and may i say, mcd, you need to get over her. too much time you're spending over her. well i don't know you so i really shouldn't say that. ignore that last comment.. not the one saying that i shouldn't say that but the one befor that... yeah! SO! how are you? haven't heard from you in quite a while! how are your studies? marching band ended... it makes me sad but I will be doing spirit band... about thirty marchingbanders playing at hockey, and basketball games... yay! but yeah... same old here.. been trying to write more... ahem.. which you should review.. but yes i think this review is long enough. Good night! and great piece! Kim

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