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Reviews For: Refraction

teh tarik
2004-01-22
ch 1,
abuseWow, this piece is awesome! Very sensual, vivid imagery ^_^ I hope you continue writing here in FP...you're a great writer, thanx for your review.
glitterjewele
2003-12-18
ch 1,
abuselol just PG? :P kidding. i love it. the second stanza is my favorite, methinks. lovely, lovely.
Arynnl
2003-12-11
ch 1,
abuseThat's a really great poem! I liked it and the topic was awesome! MORE DIRTY POEMS!
JackDavis
2003-11-10
ch 1,
abuseM, very sensual. I love the diction. This poem ran very smoothly in my head, but I don't understand what the four asteriks at the beginning are for.
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