Wow, this piece is awesome! Very sensual, vivid imagery ^_^ I hope you continue writing here in FP...you're a great writer, thanx for your review.

lol just PG? :P kidding. i love it. the second stanza is my favorite, methinks. lovely, lovely.

That's a really great poem! I liked it and the topic was awesome! MORE DIRTY POEMS!

M, very sensual. I love the diction. This poem ran very smoothly in my head, but I don't understand what the four asteriks at the beginning are for.