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| teh tarik 2004-01-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this piece is awesome! Very sensual, vivid imagery ^_^ I hope you continue writing here in FP...you're a great writer, thanx for your review. |
| glitterjewele 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuselol just PG? :P kidding. i love it. the second stanza is my favorite, methinks. lovely, lovely. |
| Arynnl 2003-12-11 ch 1, | abuseThat's a really great poem! I liked it and the topic was awesome! MORE DIRTY POEMS! |
| JackDavis 2003-11-10 ch 1, | abuseM, very sensual. I love the diction. This poem ran very smoothly in my head, but I don't understand what the four asteriks at the beginning are for. |