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| WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 2007-04-19 ch 1,   | That was actually very good, and kind of reminded me of a Stevie Smith poem. Anyway, well done. Kate )0( |
| Shadow 3013 2004-06-25 ch 1, | The last stanza flows well, but the other two could stand a little work in that area. It's nothing major, mind you, I'm just being picky. Also, shouldn't it be "and" rather than "an" in the third line of the first stanza? Okay. Now that I've nit-picked, I can say that this was a rather good poem. Nice job, keep writing! |
| AntiPleasure 2003-11-15 ch 1, | Hello *Aurelia* heh.. thanks for adding me to your favorites first of all. I see you haven't posted some stuff on here for a while *sniffs* go to it! lol anyways.. sexy poem this is, I just love the old fashioned vocabulary you used and the whole dominatrix kinda theme, very tasteful to read. Have any more poems like this? ~.^ good work *Jenna* |
| lylabri 2003-11-10 ch 1, | How pretty. You have a way with words. |