Fabulous poem.

Twilight Starr

Very nicely done. I don't see any where to critique you. Your tone is nicely modified by connotations given off by your tone. Very melancholic and somber.

Great poem.

Wow...::speechless:. I've been in a similar situation. It kills to finally let go.

god d last few lines are so heavy.. and heartfelt... i love 'but in d end all we held were the shattered hopes of once upona time'.u r a beautiful poet.. and i admire ur style and vocabulary.. u really no how 2 xpress urself and its beautiful...keep up d great work! love and admiration Gretchen45 x plz o plz review my story 'truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot to me xx tanx xx

Aw, how touching. I love the word choice and how the poem just seems to have it's own special rythm (I am so not spelling anything right today) that would only work for this poem. I just like the poem, too, heh.

wow, that was so beautiful. i loved how you managed to put the complexity of your feeling into just a few words. it was lovely, kind , honest. i liked the way it was written a lot.

nice lyrics. u shood listne to red hot chili peppers. they inspired all my shit

this is beautiful. i love every single word i don't think you should change a thing. i've experienced somethign exactly like this. i think. at least it feels the same. i love the idea of kissing someone into oblivion.
this peice is sad, but it seems to accepting of the feelings...

wow this is a good poem. you added a nice beat to nonryming for the reveiw of my poem...and i reviewed ur stuff so dont kill me (as implied in your bio)

This is such a great poem! It flows so nicely! lol. I don't make good reviews, but this is definitely going on the fav. list! :D

a little repetitive maybe- but otherwise i like it. i especially like the line "the chance to kiss someone into oblivion"

rr some of my stuff if you want to

you must know by now, that i am a serious sucker for love related anything... not that i updated at all, but that's no big deal. this is really something man... it flowed beautifully, and had this amazing ... what's the word... okay. i lost it.

but either way, u know i loved it.

-MandaZ