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Anjeni Windsinger 2003-12-26 ch 1,	Brilliant, just great. It's 1 in the morning right now, and I'm very tired, so I probably haven't gotten the full feel of the poem, but it was enough to shock me a bit out of that drowsy state of sleepiness. I like how you combined different rhyme schemes throughout, and the one-line stanza was really powerful. Great work.
Impressionist 2003-12-08 ch 1,	very...trippy. I don't really know what else to say about it. well done?
Necromantique 2003-11-26 ch 1,	Oh yes, Christine, your bed-of-roses life seems to be overflowing with so much of angst. Back to your poem, it is great that you can have a sense of rhythm and rhyme to your poetry to coordinate with tradition. However, I think that for all your anger-streamlined poetry, the passage seems to be less linear than is required. Because poetry is not like a novel, try to insert subtle indicatives here and there to offer some direction to where the subject is progressing
Hidden Self 2003-11-21 ch 1,	luv it specially the one word lines. we can feel the loss. ~Hidden Self~
catanna 2003-11-18 ch 1,	Hey! I think this is way cool! I like it. Ya can really relate to it and i think it's done really well! ^_^ Good Job Alpha Ape! ^_^
Ninsg Veen 2003-11-14 ch 1,	first of all, tnx for reviewing me and I always want to send a message back, mostly doing it by reviewing back. second, I love your poem! your definitly good. ^^ If your looking for strong critic, I can not give it to you, since there is nothing to critisize about... great work! ^^ -ninke ps: abab right? nicely done there. I have issues with rhyme so I think it's great that you're able to write what you want to write, including the rhyme.
Seeker of the Way 2003-11-13 ch 1,	"One sweet dream came true today" --Beatles song playing in the background Seriously! And my song list is on RANDOM!! 1913 songs currently on iTunes and THIS played while I read this! I really liked this poem
Sarah 2003-11-11 ch 1,	this poem has a very deep meaning.., and truth in it... it's like all the sweet dreams and nightmares is in our mind, but when we wake up, we can't remember it... well, that's what it seems to me... left me thinking about it for quite a while... good poem!
Aimee Raven 2003-11-11 ch 1,	Hey Chrys this is great... Black thoughts of unwrought sin, Temptations that destroy the mind, Holy deeds to rekindle my kin, All dreamed through this silver line. thats my fave bit, gorgeous imagery..beautiful really, kinda sad at the end but really beautiful, write more! love and good luck, Mia
IHJ 2003-11-10 ch 1,	Forgotten by the heart and not the mind...new insight on what remembering really is. Not recalling the 5 senses in your brain, but also the emotions...Hm... I forget my dreams, mind and heart. Except for the wretched nightmares. Those are...shudder Good poem, Chris. Different style/emotion for you. :) Izzy J.
NekoKaji 2003-11-10 ch 1,	Neko: Holy cow! O.O; Tanaka: Where? O.O Neko: -.-; Tanaka... it's not a real- oh forget it... U.U; That was a wonderful poem! I love it! @.@ huggles poem This rocks! :D Keep up the good work! ;)

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