This gave me chills when I was reading it. Awesome work.


~Heart of the Sword

Awesome imagery...awesome diction...awesome poem.

^_^

~lyv

powerful imagery... great word choice and concept for this piece!

Huh...crazy...Incredibly deep and brilliant. I had a hard time following it. Absolutely awesome ending. It just ties it together perfectly. And I am still so in love with your imagery and descriptions. Great job, keep up the incredible work!

ehh... makes me feel sick. good job, very disturbing! ^_^

Its creatively morbid.

wonderful poem! well written, dark, thought-provocative, pretty powerful words. i like this. good job. keep on writing!