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| Faithiny 2005-06-26 ch 1,   | Wow. I loved the way you used & instead of 'and' to tie the two together. The single word line fit very nicely. Great job. |
| ManyShadesOfGray 2005-05-05 ch 1, | Very cool. It does remind me of Muraki and Tsuzuki. Tee hee... |
| DarkMagicCat 2003-11-17 ch 1, | this is great. It flows nicely and really shows the good and evil within and the difference of it all. |