| Reviews for Lets Take a Walk |
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Cindy Moon 11/16/03 . chapter 1AWW! This is so sweet! It gives me cavities. lolz j/k. The feelings in this are so real. -Cindy Moon *) |
silverdream139 11/13/03 . chapter 1Kya! This is yet another devastatingly PRETTY! work. Heheh...I especially like these lines: "How the snow stays in your hair, Makes it glitter when you move." "If you get cold, I'll keep you warm, I'll hold you close, and won't let go" He...so pretty. I feel inspired! Mooahahah...XD Pretty work; great imagery. JA! Terra-chan aka Pinappuru aka Ari |
BloodRed Roses too lazy to log in ElveNDestiNy 11/11/03 . chapter 1 nice...loL. for the girl you like again? That's why I say poets are such liars, and writers really are too. Living in California, have you ever seen it snow here? Maybe in the mountains... BloodRed Roses |
Rhetorics 11/11/03 . chapter 1WOW! I love winter.. I worship winter hahah. I wrote the Lamplighter dedicated to winter. Winter's the best season ever. And I'm really excited cuz it's comings oon, yaayy... okay I sound like a freak, giddy schoolgirl... And I'm starting to wonder, who are all these poems to... *suspicious look* I wo'nt bug yout hough hahah. Nice rhyming scheme, and once again... damn good imagery. Good job, keep up the good work (gotta say that at the end of everything) |