Awesome. Keep it up!

i'm definitely relating to this poem. A lot of people see me as innocent, never can do anything wrong. Anyways, great poem. There is a lot of emotion into it. Nice job.
Arayuldawen

I think you poem is good,it reminds me alot of my friends. Thank you for reviewing my story you were the very first person to review, and I might not have continued if it weren't for you so thank you.

This is great :) i love the secretiveness of it and how it confides in the reader. Technique is good as well! The lines don't always seem to flow quite right but its not noticable really! Well done