It was cool, is it about the individual not falling into the influence of society?

Very nice, metaphoric piece. Such is the stuff of reality and unreality blended together.

Loved it.

Happy Hunting,MOONLITDEMON

...I am speechless. So much pain in such a little space. Wow.

Wow...that was...inspiring. That is almost sad but very empowering. I am simply amazed at your ability to write empathically. I wish I had that skill. Alas... Good work keep it up
~~TaigaSama

Neat. It's not just the descriptions, but the way this is put together. It makes you notice things you've never noticed before, thoughts you've forgotten or lost. Fascinating. Great story, and lovely ideas. Keep writing!!

Peachez ^_~

Cool, I will never look at white walls the same way again.