That's nifty. "Past the threshold of emerald flame." Great line. It's something every fantasy buff wonders, whether there are other worlds out there. I absolutely love your rhyme scheme. It's hard to accomplish, and original, and I just love it. *hugs the rhyme scheme* Great stuff.

I loved it!
This is going on my favorite list.

Enchanted eyes that see what lies beyond the door, tell us more

^amazing intro, very nice.