|Reviews for My Pathetic Attempts At Haiku|
| meaningless parasite 5/19/04 . chapter 1
haikus are hard to get right. well done on this one. surprising how powerful such short pieces can be. this is how i feel about life.
| raeleigh 12/7/03 . chapter 1
these are great!
i'm reading a book right now where one of the best characters deals with things by writing them in haikus.
a haiku-day actually!
really great. i like the hitch-hiking one the best :)
| Lina Inverse 11/21/03 . chapter 4
| Diana Shore 11/14/03 . chapter 7
I've always wondered what exactly a Haiku is, and (I'm sorry to say) after reading your Haiku's, I'm past wondering; I'm just plain confused. Don't hate me because I'm beautiful! :-)
| The Broken Princess 11/12/03 . chapter 7
Okay...yeah, pathetic fits. At this point, my English teacher would be like "but do you really want to be good at them?" If answer is yes...I can help. If not...then you're on your own. Just beware of the snot-kicking boots with the name RY written on them...if you see them, run.
(I'm sorry if you are a person that takes stuff way too seriously, because I'm just a teen with brain damage and the ability to write poetry. So, don't track me down and kill me! )