The chapter titles are a little weird actually. This is one of those stories that are cool, yet kind of weird. It's like FLCL but more understandable! Thanks for the review!

wut do the chapter titles and the story title mean? what language are they in? just wondering...

very...umm..interesting story...i hav lk no clue wut's goin on since its only de 2nd chapter but its a good start...u dun let too much out..you're a sly one...lol..anwayz...the thing with the key is scaring me at the moment.. mr.nendo's scary...maybe i shouldn't read at nighttime. just joking! i luv all your stories! ^_^ (although i haven't read em all..im sure i will someday! promise!lol^_~)

Uwah... very interesting... update soon! Love it!

Intriguing... seems a bit rushed in places, but definitely grabs the attention. I like it a lot; please update soon!
It's odd, isn't it, that all these reviewers have ID's that start with 'S'?

Getting interesting^-^
update soon!

You should try not to put your own opinion in the Paranthesis about a sentence you write about. For example: Let the reader figure out if sleeping at her desk would hurt in the morning. In my opinion, sleeping at my desk doesn't really hurt me in the morning. But, nevertheless, the fic is really good so far, please continue soon.

Very nice! Continue please!
Bunny

Curious how the story will turn out ^-*
write more!