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| Eclipsed Mind 2004-08-09 ch 1,   | update this. its interesting |
| IanOsmond 2003-12-06 ch 5, | Excellent! You have created a great mythology to your story, and youre vast imagination astounds me. Good work! |
| JediKool 2003-11-21 ch 1, | Great! Keep going! |
| IanOsmond 2003-11-18 ch 3, | Best chapter yet. Youve got a wonderful imagination. |
| Kell Hound 2003-11-17 ch 3, | great job keep writing |
| IanOsmond 2003-11-16 ch 2, | Excellent. Once again, i believe you need to ease youre charactors into their life changing roles a little more, but i love youre charactors and your storytelling abilities. I am definitly excited to read more |
| IanOsmond 2003-11-11 ch 1, | A VERY interesting idea. Youve created a wonderfully imaginitive story. It could use a little more fleshing out, mind you. I think Lucia would be a little more overwhelmed by what is happening to her. Anyways, youre off to a great start. I hope to read more soon! |