I just wanted you to know I had read this.
It has a nice start. It is so tragic.
I really feel badly for Abigaile. But, that's good. I also felt badly for other tragic characters that get treated horribly -- like "Carrie" written by Stephen King (is all I cna think of right now).

Hey a great start!! Now that you have my attention please continue the story! Well written I can close my eyes and see each person so clearly
KEEP GOING
And could you review mine? Its three stories that weave together to make one big saga that is far from finished but theres a good start
Thanx

I love this so far. I love the character. I love the attitude. Now I'm going to read all the other stories in your account. =)

The rating may need to be a bit higher, at least for this chapter. Very good writing, the description and feelings of the main charcter was entrancing. This left me with a few questions so you need to update soon to answer them!