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xx 3DD Fan
2008-08-12
ch 3,
I love how you are creating an alternate ending. I know that you haven't updated in a while... maybe you will pick this back up and finish it. I hope, anyway!
La-depdpeps
2006-04-15
ch 1,
please continue, its so important that u do!
Lola Sanchez
2004-11-05
ch 1,
Excellent! Both were fantastic! I found myself unable to read at times cause he just creeped me out! Hope you continue...please do!
Darkness within me
2004-05-03
ch 3,
hey, i liked this chapter...i was hoping u would include some sort of fault. but theres just one little thing wrong. if ur using chloroform as the stuff to knock jody unconcious, then that doesnt work cuz it takes at least 10 seconds for it to kick in, and it doesnt last very long. so iunno, u mite wanna try something else, but thats just my suggestion.
zagato
2004-03-30
ch 3,
I like the title of this chapter - unexpected visitor. this update was so cool. jody is doing a great thing considering the circumstances. she is playing along with dithomas and making him happy. i just hope she does not get pregnant - that would make things permanent. thank you for updating and please write more.
Deranged One
2004-03-05
ch 2,
Wow. I have enjoyed this story, and your other one, but I must say, I'm glad you decided to make this alternate ending. It's really good. Looking at the other reviews, I am inclined to agree with most of them. I think that the idea of her learning to love him is sweet, but maybe she stays with him and never really loves him, until he gets taken away from her? And then she realises that the thing she misses most is the thing she never realised was there...love.
And I also agree with him trying to get her pregnant. Ultimate way to keep her with him. And, when she's pregnant, who says that would stop him from getting sex? Pregnant women could turn him on. ~_^
I'm starting to weird myself out, so I'll stop here.
zagato
2004-02-26
ch 2,
Thank you for updating. That was a wicked chapter. I find it surprising that Jody had an ** even though she was having sex against her will. Her body sure reacts differently from her mind. Maybe she's going to have Stockholm syndrome-when the kidnapped falls in love with her kidnapper. It's a survival mechanism, but I sure hope Jody escapes before it's too late. Is she still taking the Pill? Or is DiThomas trying to get her pregnant? Again, thank you and please update.
The White Lady
2004-01-21
ch 1,
Oh. I liked your other story, but always wanted a different ending. This new story sounds good...Post soon!
CharlieDog
2004-01-03
ch 1,
ugh how could you? lol hurry and update soon
darkraven2000
2004-01-01
ch 1,
I love this chapter, please update soon.
Asch
2003-12-19
ch 1,
Oh, a fork for the story! Cool! Now we get to see what could have been. Is he gonna let her go? Or are they gonna move to Mexico? Cant wait to see!
WordsofRemedy
2003-11-27
ch 1,
I'm so glad you continued with an alternate ending! It's really well written. Update soon

~WordsofRemedy
xxkiss me deadlyxx
2003-11-20
ch 1,
oh plleeaasee have her kick his ** pleaase!
jan
2003-11-12
ch 1,
oh, i'm liking this. add more soon. :)
zagato
2003-11-12
ch 1,
Wicked story! Di Thomas sounds really bad - he kidnaps Jody but he wants her to be happy with him. I have read something like this - Genteel Obsession by Scribe Mozell. Hope Jody escapes. Good work! PLease update.
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