Reviews for The elements within

Nicolette Singholiov 2004-01-25 ch 1,	I like its philosophy, if that is the affect you intended ...
Incubabe 2003-11-25 ch 1,	Killer final two lines. I'm adding you to my faves!! Oh, and strange but true - I'm Cancer/Leo cusp as well!! Bizarre!
Ishuzu 2003-11-18 ch 1,	This would make good lyrics to a song. I liked the mirror effect of this poem.
Jesi Lynna 2003-11-16 ch 1,	Amazing.. I like it.. Must be ** ya...
Miyabi-chan 2003-11-14 ch 1,	DARKNESS! LAUGHS INSANELY Okay... I like it! AND NOW I HAVE REVIEWED ALL YOUR STORIES AGAIN.
SurrealEthereality 2003-11-13 ch 1,	good job, i really like it. especially the last verse!
Infinity04 2003-11-12 ch 1,	Exist within my soul Within my being Making my mind whole ~*amazing lyrics!
rocket baby doll 2003-11-12 ch 1,	this is good stuff.. i like how you described the elements as beings within you, and the last verse, i like how you mixed it up like that... Keep it up!
Sias 2003-11-12 ch 1,	Not bad. There is room for improvement (no offence intended). I would suggest you get rid of the 'too's, as they seem artifical, modern and out of place. There's one spot, I believe, where you abbreviate using an apostrophe. Whenever I write Fantasy, or poetry, I try to use full words. It makes it seem more serious. I found this a bit long, and slighly boring, but I really like the style of your writing. It tends to flow very nicely. Kudos.