Once again, I sigh. You truly have something.

great rhythm!

Poetic Structure.
I didnt the like the repetetiveness.
Though it is more effective that way.
Just my opinion though.

Great repetition in this poem, it adds a very powerful effect to the atmosphere. The sentence structure also helped intensify it.

yet another superb poem! i seriously know how this feels. you have a great talent for putting feelings on paper. keep it up!

I don't think that this one is as good as the others, but I just exchanged an email with occasional harsh words with someone, so that could have affected my judgement.
As a side note, I find it odd that both of your unreviewed poems that I've seen are about the same thing...or are they all about the same thing, and I've only read 2?
Anyway, I shall continue to skim. Good day.
Oh, I just realised I didn't mention this anywhere- it was good. Hoorah.