*whipes the tears from eyes* it so beautiful...i was cinfused about the point of veiw at first. is this the storyu of an angel fallen in love with the devil? or just a sinner with the name Lucifer? the poem is beautiful, even now i'm playing around with ideas on how thw story must go, i'm going to go check to see if you've written anything else on it yet. cheers

WOW that was amazin' i really love the way words were used, adn brought to life. like a small reality.

please read my short poem, Black paints and Red shoes.

Love Rim...

That was very good!
It was the best!

A very good poem. I'm impressed with how well it flows, in a very nice rythmic pattern. Kudos.