Perfection.

the imagery is great in this one! but i think the end could use a little work. but great job! keep it up!

Once again, I like the way you take opposite looks at the same thing, almost making it it's own metaphor.

I really liked the beginning, but the ending it needs work, i think. Regardlessly very good poem.

"The fire faded and I was forced to cry you out drop by drop, tear by tear."-c'est perfection
the writings of a poetic pro

I feel it...wonderful evocation of the emotions. Great language. Keep writing!