|Reviews for Remnant|
| Ela-chan 6/27/04 . chapter 1
| starsfade 4/19/04 . chapter 1
the imagery is great in this one! but i think the end could use a little work. but great job! keep it up!
| Blackout the Swordsman 3/29/04 . chapter 1
Once again, I like the way you take opposite looks at the same thing, almost making it it's own metaphor.
| karla 3/18/04 . chapter 1
I really liked the beginning, but the ending it needs work, i think. Regardlessly very good poem.
| axica 2/19/04 . chapter 1
"The fire faded and I was forced to cry you out drop by drop, tear by tear."-c'est perfection
the writings of a poetic pro
| vers le sud 12/9/03 . chapter 1
I feel it...wonderful evocation of the emotions. Great language. Keep writing!