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| AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-23 ch 1,   | OMG, love it love it love it. Awesome, wow, amazing, superb, magnificent, stupendous. Good job Solo. |
| Rubber Duckie13 2004-04-06 ch 1, | not rhyming...nice. kinda choppy, all the fragments and all. lotsa feelings in this, love it. maybe next time you should try putting some of the lines together, or adding to them...otherwise great poem...gj RD |
| Escapist 2004-01-19 ch 1, | I actually really liked the style of this, the choppiness. It fit with your subject theme. Beautifully written. |
| amphetamine-003 2004-01-19 ch 1, | Wonderful imagery, and I love the structure of the poem. |
| Porphyrophobic Grape 2004-01-18 ch 1, | this is great. I love the style of it, the short bursts of thought. its very prevoking. great job. |
| DuchessAilene 2004-01-18 ch 1, | This makes me think of a quote I heard once about "screaming in a crowded room but nobody hears." Well done again. Kinda Linkin Park-ish too, but very original. You have a lot of talent with poetry from the work I've read of yours, good job! |
| Amethyst Horizon 2004-01-10 ch 1, | Awesome! i love how you list one word and then give a synonym...great poem! |
| SilentRebellion 2004-01-03 ch 1, | I like your unique style, a lot of ppl try to get a good flow, and sometimes the lack of flow is the best way. awesome poem |
| Eternal Twilight 2003-12-04 ch 1, | Wow! ^-^ I loved that! ^^ Man, I doubt I'd ever be able to do something as descriptive as that one poem. ^^ I loved how I could picture this all, eventhough it was little sentances, and how strongly you worded this poem as well. ^^ Great job! Keep writing, dude! ^^ Thankies for reviewing my poem! ^^ ~Seraya |
| dmbbelladonna 2003-11-30 ch 1, | I really enjoyed...written veryv well...i really like the style of writing...it takes the images to a new level! |
| Infinite Smiles 2003-11-24 ch 1, | Beautiful poem. I like the rythm. I like the whole idea of standing still, while the other person just keeps walking. |
| Arayuldawen 2003-11-19 ch 1, | wow, that is an awesome poem. I really think that. The shortness of each line works really well. The poem is very strong. ~Arayuldawen~ |
| Rebecca Kelsey 2003-11-14 ch 1, | I like incomplete sentences. lol. They seem to work well with me and apparently you. Very cool! lol. Did I mention im not good with reviews yet? keep writing! -*Eressea*- |
| EchoesOfReason 2003-11-14 ch 1, | I...oh...uh...WOW! 0_0! That's all I can really say. This is...*speechless* amazing! WOW. Uh...beautiful really! It's deep and meaningful and thought provoking and...wow. Keep it up, for interpretive poetry like this, you've got a knack *I think I spelt that right!* ...wow... Love always, A-Light-From-Your-Darkness |
| WatermelonMoon 2003-11-13 ch 1, | Wow...sorry I'm no good at reviews but that was...AMAZING! You showed the emotion so well and it hit me real hard, you wrote that poem really well and I really like it, keep writing, you're good! |