I like it. Ive noticed that you seem to be able to convay such powerful images and such unimaginable pain in such a short span of writting. I have rarly seen this before. Bravo.
Val

Nice use of Tolkien's quote. Is there a person who inspires you to write such heart wrenching things?

A wonderful poem, but I wonder if the second-to-last line couldn't be reworded a little?

This is actually terribly sad. What I got from it is loving someone who turned out to be a bad person or loving someone and having to deal with their death/going away. Yet another great piece from an awesome writer.

great poem...i wrote one with the exact same title...kind of funny...lol :)

i love this...great job!

Wow. You turned a cliche and made it into your own. Nice job. I especially like that last lines:

Now, light glistens off of the tears that pour forth from my eyes.

And you are in them, gleaming at me from the inside.

Great job.