This is so romantic... It sounds very well, fantasized. It's like every girl's dream put into words (well maybe not every girl, but eh, you get my point) It's well-written and of course, poetic. I find it cute and sweet. The rhyming's great, but in some parts, it doesn't flow too well, other than that, it's a fantastic poem. keep writing.

wow...again im rendered speechless to another one of ur marvelous poems...its beautitful! its so profound and so smooth...wow...

Wow, that was really good. I feel like that about someone in my life too. I just couldn't put it into words. You have a great talent for love poems. HA! and youre telling me thats not beautiful?
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I love it..It's so..I don't know but Yay for you :-)

neat poem. The theme is really relevent to life, so many people ask these questions and never search for the answers. I like the simplicity :)

Wow, that was a really good poem. I have been so tempted to ask, not if you love me but if you like me to some guys I know but I've always felt like that feeling you express in this poem. Keep up the good work! Thanks for reviewing me. God bless!
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hey awesome poem! It feels so real, the way you put it into words was amazing. I can actually relate with your poem, and probabvly a lot of others, so that made really kool too.

it is Bee-yoo-ti-ful. lol. No, seriously this poem is really awesome and I love it.

This is good! For some reason this poem reminded me of the song, "Hero," I think it's called. The one that goes, "I can be your hero..." Yeah, whatever.

That was amazing! I can totally realte to how you feel- or at least I know how the poem makes me feel!
btw, I am fully with you on the G.W. Bush thing.

I realy like this. I can't believe no one else has reviewed this. This is VERY good! I'm glad you appreciate my other works. I love to hear feedback from other poets/authors. Thanks you.

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame