You're a very gifted poet, I felt as if I was realy there. I hope you produce some more poetry as excellent as this one.

Thanks for my review,

Iris.

omg thats great. I wich i could write like that *sigh* oh well thats alright. Maybe you'll check out mine and give me some tips?

Hi,

I like this poem. I have been to Egypt before.

Thanks for sharing :)