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| Winter's Roar 2004-08-21 ch 1, | Oh, so cool!! This sounded almost dreamlike as i read through it. Once again, your word usage (sp? is that even a word) is brilliant. You use words that sound good, feel good on the tongue, and add character to each phrase. Very impressive, and quite fun to read. Wonderfully written. ~ winter |
| Samantha Renee 2003-11-25 ch 1, | That was cool. I get lots of mental blocks and afetr reading this... well... i forgot why i even read it. It has a cool theme. For people like me who keep on forgetting. If you think about it... it's like travelling and meeting someone close to you once... or you were just dazed and forgot you were still in the real world and you also thought that you were talking to an all powerful and mighty evil overlord. Thank god you haven't beaten 'em up. I'd LOVE to continue but it would all sound as stupid as all the things i said before. ehehehe Keep the writing up and God bless! I love poetry, and also yours! This poem's going to my faves! :D |
| BLUEMIDGET 2003-11-13 ch 1, | deep... hey thats really good check out my poems and review them i want to know what you think |
| Prophecy Puppet 2003-11-13 ch 1, | *blink* Wow, this is really good! The word choices really make me jealous...leand me some of your talent, will you? Deffinately going on mai favorites, keep up the good work! |