Reviews for In death do we not part

flowerthief 2003-11-19 ch 2,	I really like the beginning...the middle is just kinda boring. Sorry. I like the end and the beginning but I agree with Jack. GOOD JOB!
JackDavis 2003-11-13 ch 1,	This has potential, but the base idea is overused, I've seen several movies just like this, it needs a twist. The diction (word choice) is a little weak too, you could go through and spice it up a bit with a thesaurus. Is there more to this story? There's a lot of possibilities you can have with death, and nobody can really prove you otherwise, have fun with it, be creative!