Reviews for Cruelty, Lies and Hate

aulliana 2004-04-12 ch 1,	Disturbing in a way, yes, but of course that just makes me like it more. Check your subject-verb agreement, though. ~_^ Blessed be!!
Punky Monkey 2003-11-13 ch 1,	Couple of things i'd say are scrap 'all' in line 7. and 'as' in line 8. and say 'leave' not 'leaves' (ruins the flow in line 10. Good poem though.