i love your style...its i dont know what it is, and normal i can do even parcially presentable reviews, but after reading your words my few english skills tend to go to the **. i really loved this, the idea of breathing love...amazing. KUDOS!

Wowies...^-^ Pretty!
Spastically cool:
"...like breathing water,
mixed with oil spread upon my parched lips."
"I would rather breathe in you."
A wonderful, very soft feel about this poem...gorgeous.
~~Soaking in my silver dream~~
-Arii aka Terra ^-^

AW!! This one's just lovely that's all I can say. You just want your lover's oxygen, I can understand that *smiles* ^-^
*Jenna*

You don't fail to amaze me... your poetry is so powerful that it gives me chills everytime i read any of your stuff... AMAZING... one day you shall be a very much loved poet...

aw, it's short and sweet. "i do not live in reality. / (it simply isn't suited for me.)" heh, that made me giggle at first...then as i progressed through the poem, i saw the deeper meaning...yeah, i'm rambling. lol.

-escape into reality

m me likes... short & too the point... i can relate.. nice ending!