| Reviews for The Reality of Breathing In Love |
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Dirty Wallpaper 1/26/04 . chapter 1i love your style...its i dont know what it is, and normal i can do even parcially presentable reviews, but after reading your words my few english skills tend to go to the shit. i really loved this, the idea of breathing love...amazing. KUDOS! |
silverdream139 1/17/04 . chapter 1Wowies...- Pretty! Spastically cool: "...like breathing water, mixed with oil spread upon my parched lips." "I would rather breathe in you." A wonderful, very soft feel about this poem...gorgeous. Soaking in my silver dream -Arii aka Terra - |
AntiPleasure 12/2/03 . chapter 1AW! This one's just lovely that's all I can say. You just want your lover's oxygen, I can understand that *smiles* - *Jenna* |
SerAnonima 11/21/03 . chapter 1You don't fail to amaze me... your poetry is so powerful that it gives me chills everytime i read any of your stuff... AMAZING... one day you shall be a very much loved poet... |
escape into reality 11/13/03 . chapter 1aw, it's short and sweet. "i do not live in reality. / (it simply isn't suited for me.)" heh, that made me giggle at first...then as i progressed through the poem, i saw the deeper meaning...yeah, i'm rambling. lol. -escape into reality |
simpleplan13 11/13/03 . chapter 1m me likes... short & too the point... i can relate.. nice ending! |