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Reviews For: Breaking Up Is Hard to Do

DancinDramaFreak
2003-11-27
ch 1,
To New Age Prophet...the word you are looking for is 'Abismal'. There is no such word as 'Obismal'. Get the word right if your going to insult.
Your story is definitely NOT 'Obismal' or even 'abismal'. I really liked it, and once again know where you're coming from. Keep it up!
New Age Prophet
2003-11-13
ch 1,
Obismal. Absolutely obismal. What is this trying to be? Like a soapy? Your dialog is cheesy and you screw up the "we" in the first sentence" a break-up doesn't matter, you obviously live in your teenage barbie world.
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