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Vanessa's Romeo
Karin Gordon
2003-11-17 . chapter 1
Hey!
Thnx for the Reviews and Constructuve Criticism,
I appreciate it alot.
CR
Papillon Sierra
2003-11-16 . chapter 3
you could use a little more detail
Papillon Sierra
2003-11-16 . chapter 2
still interesting... not really my kind of story but i'll keep reading... please edit for grammar
Papillon Sierra
2003-11-16 . chapter 1
hm... interesting... i will read on
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