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| Theatre des Vampires 2006-07-26 ch 1,   | Pretty good, love the metaphor |
| Nickster25 2005-09-03 ch 2, | why would this only be a one shot story? this is so good. i have my own vampire story and this one is much better. |
| glitch804 2004-02-12 ch 1, | freaky story, but thanx 4 the review, actually Tristan is a boy and girl name, just sounds different. I don't know I'm used to it because i know a girl named Tristan(although this has nothing to do with her) -glitch- ^_^ |
| Lightness 2003-12-23 ch 2, | the whole falling-in-love thing seemed to happen really abruptly but oo well. im glad youve continued this piece. it really is very good. keep writing, kid. happy holidays and what not. bye. |
| Rob Riemensnyder 2003-12-21 ch 1, | Great story! I had a great time reading it this morning. Kept me glued to my seat the whole time. I'm going to read some more of your work over the holiday. Keep up the awesome work! |
| FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAd 2003-12-20 ch 1, | wow! this is really good. Keep writing cause i want to know what happens! 10/10:D merry xmas one and all! |
| Silver Phoenix Falling 2003-11-19 ch 1, | I enjoyed reading this story a lot! My only complaint is that it should be longer. Can't wait for the next chapter, if there is one! |
| Lightness 2003-11-16 ch 1, | hey there, cool story. i like how you started off and then wrapped everything up with that last little paragraph. once again, your descriptions are wonderful. anywayz. great job. kay, buh byee. have fun, kiddie-o. |