I'm not really sure where you're coming from on this, but I found truth in it, regardless. But just because some people (Even some that claim to be Christians) go on 'Holy crusades' doesn't mean that they really are Christians, or that that is what Christianity is about. They are just. . .misguided fools. Remember, Christianity isn't a religion, it's a relationship. That sounds churchy, but many people overlook it. :)

a bit vague, so i don't quite get what's going on... *shrug* still sounds very nice though!

Love the last line, actually the whole last stanza. Good imagery...tis true as well...

What a great message. I'm not usually a fan of rhymes, but they really worked to drive home the point of that last stanza. Nice job.

that was fantastic
one of my favorites of yours.

with love,
raye