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| Aaron Portelli 2003-12-05 ch 1,   | You can really feel the emotion dripping from the words of this poem. I like it. Keep up the good work! |
| jhgfjvkjg 2003-12-05 ch 1, | By the way. . .I forgot to say this I had a poem like this up earlier, with a different title. I was however, unhappy and changed it and a couple of other minor things! That's all. Later. Rin. |
| Layne R. Pendragon 2003-12-04 ch 1, | I like this one, but it's depressing. But I still like it. The expression of self is moving and the fact that not everything rhymes gives it a a sense of freeness. Keep up the good work! ~*~_Layne/Raven the Battle_Dragon_~*~ |
| BetrayedShadows 2003-11-13 ch 1, | Wow, I really like the poem. It has a lot of emotion to it. Keep up the good work! |
| Non-existent Puritanism 2003-11-13 ch 1, | Ah! So true. We may work ** this place called earth, but when we die we are eventually lost and forgotten. Into Nothing... |