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| Savoria 2004-02-05 ch 1,   | I have to admit, though this is good writing, that it is somewhat confusing. At first, I was not sure if this was in first person, because the writing was unclear. your description was nice, but I don't think it had enough dialouge. For an unfinished piece of work, it was pretty good. |
| Rozovian G 2003-12-06 ch 1, | You got my attention with this one. It's well written, and somehow manages to take me away from my chair and onto that beach. It's a very good story, u'know. Continue, would you? |
| Rachelle Rusher 2003-11-14 ch 1, | Oh write more soon! Very detailed and suspenseful. Varied vocab as well. |