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Phantom Lover
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abuseIt's so touching... It's so amazing what would someone do for the person he/she loves. Well, if only Teresa wasn't being affected by what Cynthia had said then the two couple might be still together...

~PhantomLover
Citharia
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseSweet, I like it.

The ending was so sad, though...but the story was extrememly bittersweet.

You deserve that marks that you've got ^^ don't worry. Your teacher has good taste :)
philoslove
2003-11-22
ch 1,
abuseWoah! This is really good. Even if it is trash or junk, it is a terrible one, cos its not supposed to be classified as 'junk'! Good effort man! You really got the right mark! Don't stop writing k?
Jenna
2003-11-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI came here via TOD... (define my heartbreak). That story was unusual yet touching. If only Teresa had not been so blind to see that Edward was complimenting her and not the shoes... *sigh* Beautifully written :)
___hilarie burton ;*
2003-11-16
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was so good. very sad too.
ad0rkable
2003-11-15
ch 1,
abuseWow! I really love this story. I can't believe you didn't get 30/30. It's just really good. By the way, this is *FABOLOUS on TOD. I had to register to review. But that's ok.
Melancholy Butterfly
2003-11-13
ch 1,
abuseThe ending was so sad! Anyways well written, you certainly did deserve the mark that you got in your exam for it!
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