A story people can relate to is always a good one. You write a lot of those and ya know what,its paying off. I dare say that this story has sticken a spark in me. I now know how to explain how I feel, and understand whats happened to me in recent pains in my life. Once again, thank you for the skillful writting and inspiration thoughts.

- Vigilant

thanks for the review! i figured why not check out some of your stuff to return the favor and your an amazing writer!

good, plz r n r..minz

I really like this. Maybe you should wite some more, explaining what's been going on, but as it is, it's very good.

Tainted Lover xx

I honestly think this could have been a better poem than a story. It had a good story for it, but the way it was written made it seem like an open ended poem.