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| Lizzy B. 2003-11-25 ch 1, | hey...where are my bongo drums? *chucks them at u* |
| moocedes 2003-11-23 ch 1, | hello!.. i love that poem.. hehe i remember when u tripped in the puddle.. ya well im going to go read your other stories and poems. cya @ school -Mercedes |
| Bamboti 2003-11-15 ch 1, | lol, this is very good :-). very cool how it all goes together. |
| Shandris 2003-11-15 ch 1, | *lol* That was so funny! Loved the rhyme Scheam! (to continue the rhyme patteren a little better on line 13 (Doing all things in my power to get to class) Erase the to get to class. Everyone knows you're going to class and it flows better. PS that was a sugesstion don't get mad! You don't have to do it if you don't wanna! |
| KatieBresee 2003-11-14 ch 1, | wow! I love it! hey you know some parts sound like dory on finding nemo when she keeps remembering "P.Sherman, 42 wallaby way, sydney" ok well i'm obnoxious and i talk too much. Keep writing! your work is spectacular! -Kaiik |