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| Laksha 2004-01-31 ch 1, | Damn, that's so powerful. It made me short of breath reading the last part. It flows wonderfully, even a little rhyming in some parts. This peice is truly beautiful. |
| Incubabe 2003-11-25 ch 1, | I think my lungs have ceased to breathe... you've just left me breathless and stunned. Damn, you're good |
| Ishuzu 2003-11-18 ch 1, | Far as depressing poems go, (And I don't have to say that there are a lot of them on this site...) this was one of the best I've read |
| Jesi Lynna 2003-11-16 ch 1, | wow... I'm without words... Tears make tracks down my face.. I'm sorry.. :-( PLEASE FORGIVE ME! |
| Miyabi-chan 2003-11-14 ch 1, | My friend is at my house and she's saying, "It's so beautiful! *sob* *sniffle, sniffle*" Pathetic isn't she? She says, "It's really nice, but I didn't cry." Okay, enough with the writing for her, it was good. I MUST REVIEW ALL YOUR POEMS AGAIN! And your right in my last poem I didn't use " dark" once. Bye! |
| Keith Jayce 2003-11-14 ch 1, | That is such the saddest poem. I felt so lonely when I read it. |