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Reviews For: Leaving me alive

Laksha
2004-01-31
ch 1,
Damn, that's so powerful. It made me short of breath reading the last part. It flows wonderfully, even a little rhyming in some parts. This peice is truly beautiful.
Incubabe
2003-11-25
ch 1,
I think my lungs have ceased to breathe... you've just left me breathless and stunned.
Damn, you're good
Ishuzu
2003-11-18
ch 1,
Far as depressing poems go, (And I don't have to say that there are a lot of them on this site...) this was one of the best I've read
Jesi Lynna
2003-11-16
ch 1,
wow... I'm without words... Tears make tracks down my face.. I'm sorry.. :-( PLEASE FORGIVE ME!
Miyabi-chan
2003-11-14
ch 1,
My friend is at my house and she's saying, "It's so beautiful! *sob* *sniffle, sniffle*" Pathetic isn't she? She says, "It's really nice, but I didn't cry." Okay, enough with the writing for her, it was good. I MUST REVIEW ALL YOUR POEMS AGAIN! And your right in my last poem I didn't use " dark" once. Bye!
Keith Jayce
2003-11-14
ch 1,
That is such the saddest poem. I felt so lonely when I read it.
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