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| Mevampiregirl 2006-01-10 ch 14, anon. | abuseYay! Everyones happy!! |
| Silver Sparkz 2005-08-07 ch 14,  | abuseNice. I like, I like very much. More soon? Please? |
| Cam 2005-08-07 ch 14, anon. | abuseHooray! You updated! And why stop now? When your characters seem to be deep in the thick of it. Andrei is still deliciously evil. His constant references to the game of chess are so cryptic. Poor Mina. You really are pulling her through the ringer. I keep expecting her to unleash on these demons, but giving the recent circumstances I can see why she'd just want to curl up and grieve. So this mysterious half-breed called Eirke shows up and, well, saves the day doesn't he? Mina is reunited with her brother, husband and child. I'd say that worked out pretty damn good. But now I'm interested in Kahil's grand plan. I mean aside from f*cking with this family, there has to be some terrible, and unfathomable designs, that I haven't picked up on. I'd like to see this building towards something truly spectacular and awe- inspiring. I can't wait for the next installment. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-02 ch 13, anon. | abuseYay! He's better! Really good story you should continue it. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-02 ch 12, anon. | abuseCool name. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseReally good. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseCoolsness. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseWay cool! |
| mevampiregirl 2005-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh!...Cool!! |
| Cam 2005-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSomehow expected Mategould to be more formally dressed. Liked the "Both of them?" comment. Cute. So now the babies born and you stop the story. O.O Not fair. Joshua is ten times better than that arsehole at the EFN RP.*Wait they're the same character you say* Gr More Badass Joshua.More MerbleMikey.And More of that winged hottie Mina. That is all. |
| vanburen 2004-06-17 ch 12, | abusegood tobi/josh scene, and i love the merblemikey. one thing that irked me was that i felt cheated in the birth scene! i know fast births happen, but i doubt she would've sent away the doctor & stuff. give us a little more detail! she just had a baby! |
| ddz008 2004-06-06 ch 11, | abusepor them! :( You have to keep writing! Save Tobias... poor Joshua Good chapter! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| vanburen 2004-06-02 ch 11, | abusepoor Tobias...at least Joshua's better! woohoo! Go Mina, she kicks **! |
| qq 2004-06-02 ch 11, | abuseI loved the chapter. I'm glad that Joshua is out of that spell. Update soon, please. Thanks. |
| J.E.Wyatt 2004-05-29 ch 11, | abuseThis sounds very interesting and more interesting does it become when I read on. Please continue |