Ahh.. the first well written story I've read in a while. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter of yours; m.. needless to say, your story has made my day and enlightened me from the lies and cruelty of this pathetic life I lead.

I'm not sure if I've the time to read the second chapter (or the rest), if I don't review again it means that I haven't. But if it is so, I will, in all honesty, return to read the rest.

Good job! I love your story.

Toodles!

O.O; Bwaseeyah...




WOW!
I mean, I jus...I...WOW!
9.6; Uh, I'ma come back later sometime when it's NOT two in the morning and review this proper, but for now...WOW! Lynne, you're nuts if you think this is bad. This is some of the best stuff I've ever seen you write.

i really love you already you do nanowrimo! thanks this is good