this is one of the grestest poems i've read of yours. very great with rhyming on the last lines and everything seemed to be perfectly in place. again great poem :)

this is exactly the type of poem i only wish that i could write.
*ticklemeELMO*

I love this poem it tells exaclty how i feel. The end doesnt really go with it though.

Perfect! Man, you keep hiting my feelings right on the nose! I wish I could write something like this; let them know out in the open how much they've hurt me...
Though everything rhymes, it fits with the rhythm so well that it all feels completely natural and right, just rolls off the toungue. Or, at least... it would, if I was talking to myself.. _

I have no idea why you think my poems are better then yours...this was amazing sweet and I loved it!

aww, that's so sweet, enjoyed it muches!

good poem! you write so well, and you let your true emotion show without over doing it. i like it. :)