Nice piece. Beautiful dark imagery.

I know your name because on one of your poems on this site it said By Ned Lis-Clarke...

wow, you say so much with so few words. Def adding you to my fav authors list! Wonderfully written. You tell such a story here, yet you leave enough out to leave the reader gussing about this mysterious man. I love the line about the ghosts haunting the one's that are not yet dead, great visual! Wonderful images in here, keep up the awesome work!

winter

well, ian (if that is your name) i truly enjoyed reading this poem. your style is unique and romantic. i always feel so cozy when i read your work. my favourite line was when you wrote 'the sky is watching with eyes of diamonds' is was so beautiful and wistful. i think you might have made a spelling error, though (sorry to be a party pooper... ) you wrote 'the one's that are not dead' and i think you meant to write 'the ones that are not dead' but apart from that, your piece was perfect in every way. i get the feeling that you are writing about a knight...am i right? a lot of your works seem to be very 'camelot-esque' keep up the incredible work, sorry about how long this review is...i hope you don't mind. rr my stuff if you get the chance... :o)

Chloe Carpenter