Interesting. Reminded me of the front cover of Master of Puppets by Metallica coz of the gravestones. One thing I might add is I thought that three questions together was slightly extreme. Two questions made ya think. One possibility could space the three throughout the poem or maybe just have two. Thats my thoughts anyway. Not that they count for much...

- Crucified Sanctity -

Wow...love this. The only thing is that the word "nearsightedness" doesn't fit. Idea good...bad word. Other than that...wonderous poem!
*Briley-Sama*