heya _ saw the reviews u gave me and decided to check ur stuff out. - really good, i like it a lot. It has a simple feeling to it that makes its meaning stronger, i like that style a lot. good job! (btw, thx 4 the reviews)

Your lines are short, its a little difficult to read but again it is original.

Great choice of words. it really flows together. keep it up, fabian.

*Jade Daughter of Darkness*