I love Sammell! He's adorable.
I like Nikolai. He amused me. And, well, even if he is a perv, he's a cute perv, y'know?
Is Piers going to come back? I rather miss him.
Can't wait for you to update!

O_O WOW! You should get this published! ^_^U I can onyl read so much at a time, so I take your story chappie by chappie. It's REALLY good!

Class is out soon so I don't have time to read the next two sections, but the prelude was kick-** awesome ^^ I love the way religion is the evil in this story, there ought to be more novels like it.

That was awesomely good. Seems like a vurreh good NaNoWriMo.

Hope to see an update soon.

great job keep writing.

Woot! Lira has sterry! *starry-eyed* And it's -fun-. Poor Sammell. And I -do- like Piers!

Rae's favorite line: Piers: "You could sleep with me. Ah, at the inn, I mean."

I like your intro! Very persuading. Where do you come up with your ideas? I can never think of anything this good. Any tips would be appreciated. Still, a very good intro. Perfecto!

Wow. this is a very cool idea, and I would really like to see where it heads. I've always found religious mythicism fascinating, especially stories about creation, and I'm working on a story with slightly the same themes as this. Nice work!