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| Jenny 2004-01-02 ch 11, | I love Sammell! He's adorable. I like Nikolai. He amused me. And, well, even if he is a perv, he's a cute perv, y'know? Is Piers going to come back? I rather miss him. Can't wait for you to update! |
| Cat's Eye Demon 2003-11-19 ch 2, | O_O WOW! You should get this published! ^_^U I can onyl read so much at a time, so I take your story chappie by chappie. It's REALLY good! |
| Moss 2003-11-19 ch 1, | Class is out soon so I don't have time to read the next two sections, but the prelude was kick-** awesome ^^ I love the way religion is the evil in this story, there ought to be more novels like it. |
| ich bin sushi 2003-11-18 ch 3, | That was awesomely good. Seems like a vurreh good NaNoWriMo. Hope to see an update soon. |
| Kell Hound 2003-11-15 ch 2, | great job keep writing. |
| Rae 2003-11-15 ch 2, | Woot! Lira has sterry! *starry-eyed* And it's -fun-. Poor Sammell. And I -do- like Piers! Rae's favorite line: Piers: "You could sleep with me. Ah, at the inn, I mean." |
| Star6 2003-11-14 ch 1, | I like your intro! Very persuading. Where do you come up with your ideas? I can never think of anything this good. Any tips would be appreciated. Still, a very good intro. Perfecto! |
| Godspeed707 2003-11-14 ch 1, | Wow. this is a very cool idea, and I would really like to see where it heads. I've always found religious mythicism fascinating, especially stories about creation, and I'm working on a story with slightly the same themes as this. Nice work! |