A neat concept... I liked all of the stanzas equally, because they all are excellently written. Great work.
~Lidless Eye

*grin* i love this. it's very well written, and the repeated phrase is used perfectly not to be overkill but to emphasize the idea you want. very nice.

Wow. thats so romantic and not in a cheesy gooey way but with real emotion written in :) Thats such a lovely poem well done

This was a true work of beauty.


~Heart of the Sword

wow.. excellently written... great imagery... awesome format! it rocks!

Another one of your truly beautiful poems! Famously written! I loved it! Great work.

~*~AbunaiChikara

One thing I noticed is how I got caught up in the moment in the midst of reading this fantastic poem. It's very romantic, and I think your work choice (silhouette, wait, slips softly, gaze) all added to the effect. As usual, marvelous work.