Yay!
I loved it since you read it to me over the phone so long ago.
Great use of synonyms. And this one doesn't rhyme! A unique feature for you!
Likes it!

wonderful piece! dark, but i love it. the imagery and diction is simply breathtaking. awesome job! keep up the excellent work!

Hauntingly cool LG... sorta creepy though

i wanted to write a poem once using single word but i dont have much of a vocab and couldnt think of words that sounded cool by themselves. now i definatly cant cuz u put all those words into this poem. nice going.

recalcitrant