a great poem!
I wish I had written it

but who is she?

;)

I like the sound of it. Nice.

I'm about to ship this to my favorite lists, it is so beautiful and amazing and just perfect; the last line is amazing and - yes, I love this.

[+ fav]

~* Noelle

Beautiful so warm and life-affirming. I like it.^^

beautiful.. I love that last line

Aw...this is really sweet!

aww thats a sweet poem I like it

beautiful and inspiring. i think it's really amazing how you fit in so many images in so few words. great job.

It's very sweet :) but I must say, a tad cliché...but still fills my heart with warmth and it made me smile :). Kudos to you for learning Japanese, I really think you should persevere until you can write a japanese Haiku, because I don't doubt you will be able to quite soon :). Love, MiaPS. thanks for the reviews

Really beautiful. I was touchd by this piece. Keep it up!

Aww this is a really lovely poem. Very beautiful. Great work! Vx

i cant find religion in thisor not right now at least

but it is upbeat. very calm

and singing

(how do you write a latest one before the newest one

okay,maybe. nevermind.

i stopped thinking way too long ago)

I love this. It sounds like an Irish ditty (being part Irish, that makes my heart all a flutter!). You should put music to this. And thanks for the review, again. P.S, I'm adding this poem to my fave's list!:)

really nice. kinda gives a peaceful feeling. also thanks for the review. ^_^