wow, that was really heartfelt! aw!! its so good, i love the way its kind of two stories in one and in a way ironic, and thanx for reviewing my story!!

speechless. no words can describe how good this poem is. I'm not really into poetry, it's not my thing, but after reading this, i'll probably start getting interested in them! Do you have a book with these poems published? if you don't, you should. it's surprising if you don't. This poem has so much emotion... wow.

Damn. I know how it feels, and I must say you articulated it well.

Wow this is truly amazing... you're an incredible author.
-Ségolin

This is really sad but very good. Just wondering do you rap? It has that kind of flare. Anyway good job.
~Soulist

It's good, but it's so sad. I really don't know what else to say...
~Kiara

wow this is a real good poem. kinda sounds like a rap or a song or something. its dark and gloomy and depressing. my kinda poem. lol. you know how many people have probably gone through this. mre han ne one knowsi ca tell you that. has this really happened? your love died in a car accident or something? if thats true i am so so so so sorry.

Great poem. The free spirit in this work is detailed really well and I loved how it rolled off the tongue when reading it.

ggod but sad that's all i can say cause i'm so sad

Very nice... Romeo & Juliet type thing, except u didn't both die for love... Very tension-building, u have to read to the end to understand and that makes it very catchy.

This poem was really good, except sad. It's hard to believe things like this really happen. I really like your work and I am anxious to read your other writings.

omg. that was just...breath taking. i really like that. it was so fresh and true. something very realistic. something that could actually happen. its wonderful how this world can hold so much insanity and heartless people, and some can come out from that and be a wonderful aspect to the world of writers.

impressive, I really enjoyed this as I enjoy all of your writings. The only thing I might suggest would be some punctuation, at least in a couple of places. Again, very good.

Woah, that's amazing.

Wow, that's strong